I am a Year 7 student at Saint Pius X School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teachers are Mrs Lauchlan and Mrs Tui.
Hi Palu,I would like to start off by saying I love your poem. I can see and feel what you are describing.It is not a haiku, though.Just change the heading to my weather poem and republish it.I don't mind that it is not a haiku because it is such a good poem.Remember, I said no images from the Internet. You had to take a photo of the weather outside your door or window and add that to your poem.Mrs M
Hi Palu,
ReplyDeleteI would like to start off by saying I love your poem. I can see and feel what you are describing.
It is not a haiku, though.
Just change the heading to my weather poem and republish it.
I don't mind that it is not a haiku because it is such a good poem.
Remember, I said no images from the Internet. You had to take a photo of the weather outside your door or window and add that to your poem.
Mrs M