Hi Sefo Palu. Its me Lukas. I just want to say next time put more effort in your work and also talk about were you and you family come from. Also make it look intresting. Anyway awesome work!
Malo e lelei Sefopalu, Its me Christopher. So far I think you can put more effort into your work.
Because it says to write about where you and your family came from but you have wrote words about your family and where you guys come from. Also you should put more detail into it like where your mum and dad come from in Tonga.
Well done for creating a poster about you and your family. I can see you are very proud of your cultural background. I like how you have added words to your poster that relate to your family. Could you add to your blog post where your family come from? Has your family lived in New Zealand for multiple generations ? Maybe your family moved over from Tonga when you were younger? If I talked about my family background, I had family emigrate to New Zealand before the Treaty of Waitangi was signed!
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ReplyDeleteHi Sefo Palu.
ReplyDeleteIts me Lukas. I just want to say next time put more effort in your work and also talk about were you and you family come from. Also make it look intresting.
Anyway awesome work!
Kind Regards
Lukas
Malo e lelei Sefopalu,
ReplyDeleteIts me Christopher.
So far I think you can put more effort into your work.
Because it says to write about where you and your family came from but you have wrote words about your family and where you guys come from. Also you should put more detail into it like where your mum and dad come from in Tonga.
Besides that your doing great!
Malo Aupito
Christopher
Kia Ora Sefopalu,
ReplyDeleteWell done for creating a poster about you and your family. I can see you are very proud of your cultural background. I like how you have added words to your poster that relate to your family. Could you add to your blog post where your family come from? Has your family lived in New Zealand for multiple generations ? Maybe your family moved over from Tonga when you were younger? If I talked about my family background, I had family emigrate to New Zealand before the Treaty of Waitangi was signed!
Comment below when you have changed your post to add the extra information so I can award you full points for this activity!
Blog ya later!
Dani